Charisma- insanity at its worse.

[charisma]

Rewritten: Charisma.

Character: Charisma

Classification: Jellicle

Description: A chocolate brown queen with a cream belly and cream streaks across her face, wrists, ankles and through her tail. She is unusually small for her age, looking more like a year old kitten than anything. Mostly unsocial, she feels awkward around other cats and tends to be a bit of a loner. Having been raped when she was little, Charisma isn’t trusting of strange cats. Violent when under pressure or afraid, Charisma is said to be insane and to be left alone, which she enjoys immensely. Wanting to be normal again, but not knowing how, Charisma is a watcher, not a helper. Silent and ‘insane’, Charisma dosen’t know what to think anymore, so she simply thinks.

Age: 3

Stats: 26 (I don’t know if I’m doing this right.)
Str- 2
Dex- 8
Con- 6
Wis- 1
Int- 5
Cha- 4

Player: Charisma


Better?

[Munkustrap Etc.]

I'm going to have to say no to Charisma. She has far too many contradictions (eg broken beyond repair yet having hope) and impossible things (one cat, one tail max).

Also, please reread the Applying for a Character board.

Thank you.

[charisma]

We are all contradictions are we not?
But i'll rewrite her.